Complaint Letter to Canteen

To CANTEEN- Telford.

Dear Manager,

I strongly request your restaurant to stop
that narcissistic, as-if-it-is-very-lifely voice
of your attendance at the service counter.
All I want in the morning is a peaceful atmosphere,
and some relaxing music, not annoying voices.

Concerning the music, I am fed up with YMCA.
It's time to purchase some new CDs.

The last thing is that please note
there are not only people coming to Kowloon Bay to work but
there are workers from Telford Gardens to all over HK.
Your opening time at 8:00am shows your ignorance to the above.

Looking forward to your rectification.

Yours,

Customer N.

Am I too rude?